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Old 10-25-2008, 07:36 AM
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in my spare time i write lyrics for songs, this i came up with today im giving to a freind so he can come up with music for it.


"What does it take"

baby I remember the first day we met
standing in that walmart line
I thought you were the one
I thought it was love at first sight
now were going cold
It kills me to see you alone

you say I'd have to change too much to peak your interest
you say theres no way it could happen

Cant you see alittle faith and a little time,
alittle love, alittle heart
give faith time, you could be mine


what does it take
to prove your the one
to stand by your side
to feel your heart beat next to mine
what does it take
to feel all love you could possibly feel inside
to stop my heart breaking day and night
what does it take.

I remember when I first looked into your eyes
I saw the angel inside
now my feelings are killing me inside
I cant stop thinking about you day and night
help me find a way to keep these tears inside

you say everything I do upsets you, makes you mad
baby cant you see I'm just a man

Cant you see I'm dying inside, I cant let go
days go by, my heart more and more it dies

alittle faith and alittle time, we could be fine


what does it take
to find my way into your heart
to take all the wrongs and make them right
to show you all the love I feel inside
what does it take
to stand by your side day in and day out
to stop my heart breaking day and night
what does it take.

you like your solitary world, you like being alone
your dreams are broken, your mad at the world
baby lets take things one day at a time
slowly meld your heart into mine
everything will be fine

Cant you find it deep inside, give me the time
I'll rebuild your dreams till the day I die
I'll do anything to see that smile shine day and night

baby baby baby,

what does it take
to prove your the one
to stand by your side
to feel your heart beat next to mine
what does it take
to feel all love you could possibly feel inside
to stop my heart breaking day and night
what does it take

what does it take
to find my way into your heart
to take all the wrongs and make them right
to show you all the love I feel inside
what does it take
to stand by your side day in and day out
to stop my heart breaking day and night
what does it take.

To give you love without end
to show you in time all things mend

what does it

what does it

what does it take.


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Old 10-26-2008, 12:53 AM
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Yes ladies not only am i Extremely cute i am also fantastic at poetry and the like.

More Epic Mattieau:

Part 2: Poems:

1. When all light is extinguished and all hope is fleeting, courage shines in the form of the brightest light, to give you hope to prevail against overwhelming odds, which creates a spark not one thats felt by all, but one that is felt by few, but those who feel it have that spark kept inside them, and that spark rekindles their flame, which creates light, an amazing amount of light which envelops the world in its embrace of which all feel.

2. Blue

Blue, Cool as the swirling sea
Blue, Free as the cloudy skies
As strong as the Oceans
Drawing you in
Slowly
Swirling around pulling you down
Till all is silent
And there is peace
Evermore
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Old 10-26-2008, 01:29 AM
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Once a song was written about the Livingston, the Livingston Storm and the ladies can't handle it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EMiJOGiaaEY
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Old 10-26-2008, 01:46 AM
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well ladies

i have the looks of william shatner,but iam brennet
i am engaged,but i wouldnt mind flirt on the internet
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Old 10-26-2008, 04:57 AM
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well ladies

i have the looks of william shatner,but iam brennet
i am engaged,but i wouldnt mind flirt on the internet

gtfo off my thread :P
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Old 10-26-2008, 06:04 AM
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i hope u write better than u talk,As for the above swears cant touch me boy,as for the thread,this is not your thread its everybodys thread,APOLOGIZE NOW!!!
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Old 10-26-2008, 06:19 AM
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i hope u write better than u talk,us for the above swears cant touch me boy,as for the thread,this is not your thread its everybodys thread,APOLOGIZE NOW!!!

emo much?
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Old 10-26-2008, 06:35 AM
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you re not making sense,from respect to the forum and to the fine people that surrounding it,i am putting an end to this petty bickering
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Old 10-26-2008, 10:23 AM
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Lonestar-- very sweet. They seem like very genuine lyrics. I've always envied people who could write poetry and song lyrics like that. I'm pretty good putting words down in prose, but I could never write with a poetic slant.
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Old 10-26-2008, 11:02 AM
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i hope u write better than u talk,As for the above swears cant touch me boy,as for the thread,this is not your thread its everybodys thread,APOLOGIZE NOW!!!
He was JOKING! (In case you hadn't noticed!)
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