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Old 06-02-2008, 10:02 AM
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Talking My ship - I drew it myself!

Please tell me how do you like it.

It's LAS (Libertanyny Agencyy v Svemir - Libertanian Space Agency) "Davon".

It's my first try to draw a starship xD.

If you like it, I'll be glad to come up with specifications - what kind of weapons it has, engine characteristics etc.

The pic is attached. Thanks for your comments!
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Old 06-02-2008, 10:12 AM
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Nice job, really! But, looks alot like the Ambassador class
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Old 06-02-2008, 10:23 AM
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Not bad. Not Bad at all.
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Old 06-02-2008, 11:02 AM
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Gosh, I did take one sketch of a ship to set an example (ie set some guidelines), but this Ambassador class is not it!

I'm really glad you like it.
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Old 06-02-2008, 11:03 AM
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Gosh, I did take one sketch of a ship to set an example (ie set some guidelines), but this Ambassador class is not it!

I'm really glad you like it.
We do like it, just giving you the feedback you asked for.
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Old 06-02-2008, 11:05 AM
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Yes sir, Admiral, I know that! I might have sounded ironic, but I didn't mean to Huh, this forum resizes attached pictures.

Here's my beauty :
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Old 06-02-2008, 11:20 AM
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Yes sir, Admiral, I know that! I might have sounded ironic, but I didn't mean to Huh, this forum resizes attached pictures.

Here's my beauty :
Ok, since you asked for opinons...here's my list
1. Change the nacelle struts.
2. Angle your deflector dish up another 15 degrees.
3. Lengthen your primary hull by a 1/4.
4. Loose whatever that is on the bottom of the saucer section, I'd suggest a obvious bump fpr a Captain's yacht.
5. Slightly thicken your sacuer section.
6. Add the sensor lines to the sacuer and primary hulls. ENT-D shows you proper placement.
7. Angle the nacelles back father, or put them out to the sides alot more.

Don't get me wrong, I do like the design! Really!

But just giving you what you asked for.
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Old 06-02-2008, 11:36 AM
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Oh my, thank you so much! Thanks for paying so much attention, really!

Tell you what: I'm going to draw a new ship, similar to this, but with all the modifications you asked, sir And I'm going to call it "LAS Zardoz"
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Old 06-02-2008, 11:38 AM
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Oh my, thank you so much! Thanks for paying so much attention, really!

Tell you what: I'm going to draw a new ship, similar to this, but with all the modifications you asked, sir And I'm going to call it "LAS Zardoz"
LOL. thanks...but call it what you want, ok?
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cool lookin!
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