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Old 11-15-2009, 08:14 AM
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Originally Posted by jerhanner View Post
Also, watch noun/verb tenses and using plurals. For example, "There have to be figures of authority." Still a bad sentance, but not as bad.
I think you are wasting your time there, Jer! But one can only hope you'll be successful.
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